Devontae narrative about friendly dragons

This is what a wrote on our recent writing test





Friendly Dragons

Once upon a time there were 2 teenage boys named Kelvin and Zane they were on their way to get and travel the world till something happened. Their plane got delayed so then they had to wait till early hours in the morning to go and start their adventure. It didn't turn out the way they planned it. But the next morning they woke up so early they couldn’t walk. . when they arrived on the plane they were excited because it was their first time ever going on a plane. When Zane got on the plane he felt nervous. The reason he felt that way was because he had never been far from his mum Zane is younger than Kelvin.


When the plane took off they both couldn't stop looking down because they thought it would break down but suddenly something happened. The plane apparently lost its balance in the air so then the plane was falling from the sky like a missle. When it hit the ground lucky it didn’t explode it was just damaged like i mean damaged so bad no one could fix it. So everyone went their own ways just to find a way out lucky the sun was coming out that would make it easier for them. They went so far away from the plane no one could see them.


When they were try to find there way back they heard something at first they thought it was something special that could help them but it wasn't how could they know the only way they could find out is if they followed whatever was making that sound they looked and looked to something else happened they heard more than one thing moving around what could it be?. As soon as they heard more than one it started to creep them out because they were wondering what it was, they looked and looked but then they were getting thirsty and hungry so they searched for other things to eat and drink. When they went back to finding the plane they finally found it but their supplies were not to be seen. They got worried.

Next they went on another adventure to go and look for things to eat and drink. Suddenly they heard a weird sound again this time they might as well leave it because they were too hungry to follow it. Then of course they found food to eat. It was the only thing on the island. The next thing they did was start searching again for that mysterious sound then they heard it again. Kelvin said “come on not again” then they ran after it they almost caught it but it ran as fast as it could. It was like the thing they were looking for wanted them to chase after it.

Then they finally found what was going on. It was a baby dragon wanting them to chase after them. They were wondering where its mum was then as soon as they said that they saw it charging at them, then they started to run as fast as they could. They thought it was trying to eat them or hurt them but it wasn't trying to hurt them or do anything. By the time she tried to be nice they were gone in a split second. Then they tried to look for the baby dragon again but then it was getting dark so they just couldn’t take it. They needed some rest so then they built them a shelter for the night. By the time it was morning they wanted to search for it to take photos.


Next they wanted to see if the dragons had any other friends then when they started to search again they forgot to pack them some warm things but it was too risky they didn't wanna lose the dragon another time. So then they were on their way looking for another couple or dragons they didn't know were friendly but it was worth a try. So they started to search more and more around places they didn't know about then wa la they found one it was drinking its water so then they tried to take a shot they got but they mom charged at them again and they were gone.


Next they decided to look for more then when they were looking they got a jackpot they found way more then they did before. They found a whole valley of them but then went up to one dragon and thought it would do something bad but it didn't. It just licked his face then after that they became very good friends and they could understand Kelvin and Zane very clearly. So then they asked them if they could get a ride on their backs to go and see where the other passengers were. They were all struggling so bad they thought we turnt crazy but yeah turns out dragons aint bad after all.

So they all rode the sun sit and lived happily ever after even though it was a hard 2 days for them they still came out alive.



THE END