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Thursday, 1 June 2017

devontae bike lessons


If your under 5 years old then you need training wheels or you can help you son to learn how to ride a bike. If you want to ride your bike fast you have to pedal fast or if you have gears you can lose them. next stage of the process If your scared and you're going down a long hill then you can lose your gears of breaks. the final stage of the process If your going up a hill If I was you I will lose my gear or get a mountainbike. At the end they know how to lose their gears and there breaks when they up and down.  
 

Tuesday, 23 May 2017

devontae simming recaont

WALT recount a personal experience

Planning my recount

Title: Swimming writing

Orientation (Introduction)
Who?
My swimming lerner was jess She told how to do put on our life jacket and all the other stuff.
What?
What she told me was  if you're on a boat and a there is hole and then if you have have a little boat then go on it or if you have a life jacket put on.
When?
When your going to go on a boat you go fishing when is sunny not raining.
Where?
Where were at the pools on the last day of swimming so first of all we went to have a shower and then went and sat down and then they said one two I was number two number one went first and then two went ather number one then we had our turn then we floated on our backs then we had our turn then we went to the pool that we always swim then we go in the drills.
What happened?

Tell it in the order it happened.
First of all: My swimming teacher was Kat & jedd.
Next we: Then we went to the big pool that says school swim that was jedd or kat’s group that went to the big pool.
After: then we went back to the pools where the other groups are where jedds group and jessica’s group.
Later on: when got we sat down.
In the end: we did floating our backs and front flip and had a race.
Reorientation (Summary)



Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentences:

Who? My swimming lerner was Kat She told how to do put on our life jacket and all the other stuff.
What? What she told me was  if you're on a boat and a there is hole and then if you have have a little boat then go on it or if you have a life jacket put on.
When? When your going to go on a boat you go fishing when is sunny not raining.
Where? Where were at the pools on the last day of swimming so first of all we went to have a shower and then went and sat down and then they said one two I was number two number one went first and then two went ather number one then we had our turn then we floated on our backs then we had our turn.

What happened? First of all: My swimming teacher was Kat & jedd. Next we: Then we went to the big pool that says school swim that was jedd or kat’s group that went to the big pool.
After: then we went back to the pools where the other groups are where jedds group and jessica’s group.

Later on: when got we sat down. In the end: we did floating our backs and front flip then went back to the walls.