Friday, 25 November 2016

crazy motat adventures devontae

Crazy Motat Adventures

and then we all ran off the bus and then we all ran because we were excited that we were going to go to Motat .

When rooms 9&10 got off the bus and we all ran off the bus because they were fun.Of the boys had to go toilet  then when we got out the boys saw the bus going so we all ran as fast as we could  .  Suddenly  It was the morning   Then we saw the  bus so we went back to gI and then we all went home  .

The End

Thursday, 17 November 2016

devontae athletics day

When i woke up i ran to school then it was athletics day ,  when the horn  went we had to go to  rotations and my first game was 100ms

We got to go in our house colors  and my house color was blue and our first game was 100ms during the race i came first

We got to go in our house colors  and my house color was blue and our first game was 100ms during the race i came first

My fun paret is the high jump because i came first

Wednesday, 19 October 2016

devontae into the cave


Start Writing Here:  Once there were three people and there  names were Bob, Ricky  and Jake. They saw a dark cave then one of them saw a pot of gold. Then they came up with a plan to get out of the cave.  Then one of them saw a very dark cave so he went into it then he saw some food then he eat it .

Then they tried to get out but there was a sake  then they tried to get out but there was no were out so they find so tools then they started ding on the way they saw a big trick then when they sloped for 1 day then they started ding . but then they saw a arm then they turned on they flashlight then they went into a dark cave and then they went down the bridge .

Again and again and again finally they got out of the cave then they saw a car so they went home then when they got home they saw their  kids and had a hot tea .

Friday, 23 September 2016

end of term 3

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Wednesday, 21 September 2016

devontae narrative

Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

Once upon a time there were me and my family we went out to go gaiking suddenly  we saw a  waterfall then they started to scream and when we all fall off the waterfall and my friends and i was scared to .

Me and my friends  went to see the els we saw 2 els and then  we came back the my family will we went to find my family we saw 2 fish and my cuzin  and my aunt  went to  go to see  more fish and there was big waves then when they came back they were covered in seaweed and water.

Suddenly a whole then they had  to quickly had to go to a  grey spot  then my friends and me went to an cave then there was too much  spiders and when we got out of the cave we were  quickly then when we got home we got kfc.

Thursday, 1 September 2016

devontae weelbarrow

PES Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!
WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.y

Introduction: Who, Where,What, When?

 when we were in the breeze me and my friend Leone and me were lining up to start the race . And the snores person had to go to the back .

WHo cheated. Why was it cheating. How I felt about the cheating.

It was cheating because they used the wheelbarrow.  I felt angry because the boys had to use their hands   after my race mr baxendine  chose  me  to go into the  wheelbarrow  with a gopro on my head .   selone got to go into the  wheelbarrow with a go pro . the winner was the person in the wheelbarrow and i real winner was  sione and  villinai .

What happen during the race.

In the race, there were people watching them having a race. When the race started there was people falling down and people dragging their team mate to the finish line. The person who was carrying the other person was getting tired and sweaty. Leone and Jez was being stupid to the camera.

Conclusion: Feelings about the race/cheating.

i was angry because i knew that someone was going to go into the wheelbarrow  and i was scared because  me
and  leone  was going to came last .

Friday, 26 August 2016

devontae problem solving

devontae winning gold

Winning Gold!
WALT: create mood in our writing.
I was on the podium and my parent was supporting me and i could hear people clapping the crying and  I could see my medal and a trophy. I could hear the fireworks and i could see the fire  when I got my medal i was proud of myself .  

Gemini 7 mission emblem and ...

Monday, 1 August 2016

We are the champions

We are the Champions!Foyer PNG.png
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write a recount.

On the first day of school the bell rang and we had to line up to go to the  Immersion Assembly .

I saw Mr Goodwin and Mr Baxendine with flags on there backs. Mr Jacobson  was using a real camera but he was not filming and Mr Brut and Kevin the kiwi was talking to us about where they went .

Team 4  is learning about the  things we are not supposed to know and it is called uncovered or called exposed. We aren't supposed to know about things like drug and we are not supposed  to know  about the virus. The theme is called   we are the champions  
My highlight was Team Four’s movie.

devontae making tidy tens

Friday, 8 July 2016

deontae carrots .

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
        WALT: write a recount.

When  I got into class I saw orange think in a plastic  bag and I was getting so hungry. I  thought about eating  It  because It  look yum.and at the end we got to eat I.
First we got a knife and a carrots then we got to started to caving and we were getting the carrots  on the floor and the people  that were still standing they had to pick up the rubbish and  when they finish they had to came back inside.
My carrot,s name was called   shawn johnson  has a big mouth and eyes. He also has big abbs.  

my highlight was when i got to cover it and eating  it.