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Friday 20 March 2020

devontae narrative young detective

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It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!
He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.
Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.
Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.
Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate. 



He was on his way to his mysterious adventure to find what he lost a minute ago. He started in his room, then after making his way to the book shelf.  He then made his way to the kitchen, then the living room, until he saw something awfully strange. it was something he hadn't seen before. It was an angel! He thought it was a good thing, but it turned out his gut feeling was wrong. This angel wasn't really good. He thought the angel would help him but the creature was evil! 
“ So you're a devil huh. “ he was wondering why it was looking at him in a weird way. It looked like it wanted to eat him up,  it was on it’s way in shock because he thought the evil angel was going to gobble him but he thought wrong. Next he went to the place he saw the thing he saw last that was in a mortal world. It takes  about two to three hours just to get into the mortal world.
 He made it was a relief he made it to the mortal world then he around looking for he looked everywhere it took him 3 hours it was almost dawn when he finished he was exhausted if he wanted to give u but he really loved the thing he lost so he went back in time to see where he lost it.
 When he went back in time he didn't see it at all. It was like it was gone forever even when he went back in time it wasn't in his hand he looked everywhere but he thought for a while there was one place he didn't look. It was at his nan's house.  He gazed for another couple hours. He did find it by the time he finished looking it was about night time he didn't give up.

 But then in weeks after things started to change around the neighborhood he commented ‘why are things different all of a sudden’  the people around him were like ‘it's because you didn't find the thing you were looking for’ do den he went about his day and started searching for it with his tremendous  magnifying glass. He strolled down the road looking with his jumbo magnifying he couldn't find it. But not very long after that they found something that took them underground so detective Adam jumped through the hole he saw and he was surrounded by larva.
  Once he hit the ground he was looking for something that looked the same as the thing he lost he went looking under there for an excellent 2 hours after that he bolted around the underground place where nobody knew. He noticed something he thought was his thing that he lost, he thought welp it was it he was delighted that he found it.

So he was skipping to the way he came into the underground but he needed a gaizer just to get out of the underground, he was looking for water but then he found it he had a bucket that he could fill up just to make a gaizer so he did then he went all the way out. Then he tried to see his house but then he couldn't see it. He tried calling someone but his phone was stuffed.


He tried to get into somewhere he could crash for the night the next day he went looking. He thought he was in a different dimension but people in his dermention people could talk the same language.  But then he found a way back home the end.