On monday the reading support people went to the pump house
when we got into the bus i sat with ash when we got their ash slept on the grass then when we got we went for lunch then
after that we got into the feather we got up to our seats and i was number 7 our seats was cool because we could see the portion . Then they shoot the gun and that was my favorite part .
On monday the reading support people went to the pump house
when we got into the bus i sat with ash when we got their ash slept on the grass then when we got we went for lunch then
after that we got into the feather we got up to our seats and i was number 7 our seats was cool because we could see the portion . Then they shoot the gun and that was my favorite part .
It was about how the fami
ly was paul because they had no money and when they said monkey the man went green when they said money then when they had the pirates party the pirates gave them some things like monkey . then after that we got a prize from miss clarke then after that we all went to the breeze then we all went back to our classes then after that to was home time and then we all went home then when i got home then i told my aunty and my mum then me and chance got to
Hi Devontae, you did an amazing job focusing on this recount of your trip with the reading support group. I want to encourage you to maybe next time come and read your writing to me or Mrs Buchanan before you publish so that we can help make sure you got every capital letter and full stop in the right place and also to check that you didn't write the same things twice. I like how you were focused on finishing your work and how you never let anyone distract you from getting the job done. Well done you!!!
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