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I am a Year 8 student in Room 3 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ.
Friday, 23 September 2016
Thursday, 22 September 2016
Wednesday, 21 September 2016
devontae narrative
| Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling. |
Once upon a time there were me and my family we went out to go gaiking suddenly we saw a waterfall then they started to scream and when we all fall off the waterfall and my friends and i was scared to .
Me and my friends went to see the els we saw 2 els and then we came back the my family will we went to find my family we saw 2 fish and my cuzin and my aunt went to go to see more fish and there was big waves then when they came back they were covered in seaweed and water.
Suddenly a whole then they had to quickly had to go to a grey spot then my friends and me went to an cave then there was too much spiders and when we got out of the cave we were quickly then when we got home we got kfc.
Tuesday, 20 September 2016
Friday, 2 September 2016
Thursday, 1 September 2016
devontae weelbarrow
PES Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!
Introduction: Who, Where,What, When?
when we were in the breeze me and my friend Leone and me were lining up to start the race . And the snores person had to go to the back .
WHo cheated. Why was it cheating. How I felt about the cheating.
It was cheating because they used the wheelbarrow. I felt angry because the boys had to use their hands after my race mr baxendine chose me to go into the wheelbarrow with a gopro on my head . selone got to go into the wheelbarrow with a go pro . the winner was the person in the wheelbarrow and i real winner was sione and villinai .
In the race, there were people watching them having a race. When the race started there was people falling down and people dragging their team mate to the finish line. The person who was carrying the other person was getting tired and sweaty. Leone and Jez was being stupid to the camera.
Conclusion: Feelings about the race/cheating.
i was angry because i knew that someone was going to go into the wheelbarrow and i was scared because me
and leone was going to came last .
WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.yIntroduction: Who, Where,What, When?
when we were in the breeze me and my friend Leone and me were lining up to start the race . And the snores person had to go to the back .
WHo cheated. Why was it cheating. How I felt about the cheating.
It was cheating because they used the wheelbarrow. I felt angry because the boys had to use their hands after my race mr baxendine chose me to go into the wheelbarrow with a gopro on my head . selone got to go into the wheelbarrow with a go pro . the winner was the person in the wheelbarrow and i real winner was sione and villinai .
What happen during the race.
In the race, there were people watching them having a race. When the race started there was people falling down and people dragging their team mate to the finish line. The person who was carrying the other person was getting tired and sweaty. Leone and Jez was being stupid to the camera.
Conclusion: Feelings about the race/cheating.
i was angry because i knew that someone was going to go into the wheelbarrow and i was scared because me
and leone was going to came last .
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